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The author had used this phrase so much, that I even found itused twice in the same sentence! I got the impression that thebook she had written, although the plot was excellent, waswritten in a hurry.
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What over-used phrases do you dislike when reading a novel orshort story? If you have any, send them to me at:peaceful_writer@yahoo.com
Yours,
Heather Truett says: "I recently read Queenmaker by IndiaEdghill, and she ended almost every chapter with 'She thoughtshe knew, but she was wrong.' Now, I notice that kind of phraseeverywhere. Every character always thinks they know..."
Well I'll just get back to my over-stuffed armchair, sit downfor a read, toss my head and roll my eyes, thus schooling myfeatures. Hopefully, I won't have to step over any moist pantiesen route!
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Other readers have their say:
Why? She had used the same phrase over and over. She used it somuch in her book that now it's my most hated phrase. What wasit? "She rolled her eyes."
* Over-active head movements
* Was she right or was she wrong?
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